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I wrote this poem myself and I am really proud of it. TB
October 20th, 2011 at 15:05
We really enjoyed typing these poems and Tyreace has made excellent effort as well as the whole of Mrs Whiting’s Literacy set. We also got to create a border for it!
October 21st, 2011 at 13:36
Well done a lovely piece of work Tyreace, you have put a lot of effort in it. Ypu could of done a little bit shorter sentances but apart from that, GREAT!!!!!!
October 21st, 2011 at 13:39
This poem is one that I really enjoyed to read but I think Tyreace should have made it rhyme a bit more, but its still enjoyable to read, well done!
October 21st, 2011 at 13:54
Wow, a lot of though has gone in this poem. Well done!
October 21st, 2011 at 14:01
I think its really good, it looks like alot of thought has gon in to thet poem. There is one bit that I don’t understand which is the bit about the sun being hotter than the king otherwise its great.
October 23rd, 2011 at 09:53
November 2nd, 2011 at 14:49
we all did really well but mine and a friends did not come out right
Lucy from Pannal
November 24th, 2011 at 13:56
I think the poem is really good and I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!
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